Wednesday, November 25, 2009

Stand up to violence against women

Today (25th of November) is the International Day for the Elimination of Violence against Women (White Ribbon Day in Australia & New Zealand.)Today I would like to share something different with my blog readers. Since the last 3 days, I have been writing 55 fiction. I found it pretty weird because I used to write some fiction in my school days, but then lost touch. I don't think they're great by any literary standards, but I hope to get better. The one I'm going to share right now was originally written on the 23rd (day before yesterday.) It's the second one I wrote, & planned to share it later. But when I found out what today was, I knew today is the right time.
So without further ado, here goes-

He handed her the flowers, and promised her it was the last time. That he'd change.
She believed him, like she always had. He seemed so sincere.
But as always, history repeated itself. False promises were made, flowers were gifted.
She accepted both... again.
The next time she got flowers, they were on her grave.


This sends out a message to victims of domestic violence. I know that it's not easy, but you've got to stand up to him. Before it's too late. This was inspired by a poem we had in school.
I would love to hear your views on my 55 fiction.

Remember the Bell Bajao campaign against Domestic Violence? The message it sent out was simple. When you know that there's domestic violence occurring, (at a home near you) don't be a silent spectator. Ring the bell.
Let us pledge to all try our best to stop domestic violence in whatever way we can. Spread awareness. Help victims. Ring the bell, whatever. As long as we do not remain silent spectators to crimes against women.

Until next time,




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  1. Very nice.
    Good attempt at spreading the word against Domestic Violence on the White Ribbon day.

    Keep up the good work.

    Cheers!!
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  2. Nice initiative. Domestic violence, surprisingly, is on a rise. And it is not restricted to 'kaamwaali baai's' anymore, even the convent educated, money minting corporates are indulged in it...! So much for the progress our society and increasing literacy has brought...!

    -JAI HIND
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  3. I liked the story, but i think the message is more important,domestic violence is just not acceptable....I have heard cases but luckily never seen one, I guess it is not something that will end just like that...this message has to be told and ingrained in the minds of the next generation..thats when this will get over
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  4. I could never really understand why domestic violence was tolerated to a very large extent by Indians. The Bell Bajao initiative was noble, but it's impact is not exactly quantifiable, nor do I think it was effective enough...

    You're right in saying that it should not be tolerated. And that message should go out to the very women who put up with it day after day.. Even if the community can't take the cause up. They should!
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  5. Let me be very frank with you, the 55-fiction is so-so. I thought it is famished. Feed it a little more info and energy. It is simple and direct. Allow the reader to discern information from what you have written - that is the whole idea of 55-fiction - a little suspense and a little twist. Having said that, however, the message is very clear.

    What I like most about this blog, and this is not to make up for the "frank" opinion (the opinion was given just because I "know" you can do much better), is that you spend time to write on variety of topics. I am sure your dream of being a journalist is a fast happening event. :-)

    I talked about this Bell Bajao campaign during one of the Toastmasters sessions we hold in my office. The entire session was centered around this theme (I guess, I really don't remember).
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  6. Domestic Violence is more prominent in India and it is is like a weed which is degrading our nation's pride besides Dowry menace. Good message and keep spreading. Only enlightment and empowerment of woman can reduce this menace in India.
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  7. @Chatterbox- Thank You! :)

    @Azad- Yes, very true! We're supposed to be progressing, but in reality we seem to be regressing!

    @Shahid- Yes, educating the next generation is the ONLY way to remove this grave social evil from it's very roots. And a better police force would help. They never agree to file FIRs, they make you sort it out by making the perpetrator apologize to the victim. What good is that? The perpetrator just gets more confident, knowing that the police, our so called 'protectors' don't really give a damn!
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  8. @JR- Yes, it starts with the victim standing up to it, after that there are many places where the victim can seek help.

    @Vittal- Thank you for the advise. I have read some lovely 55 fiction with surprising twists on other people's blogs. You know I don't ususally write fiction, but this & two others was just a way to pass time during some boring lectures. Also maybe I was scared that I was suffering from Brain Atrophy! I had intended to publish it later or maybe never. But when I found out about international day for elimination of violence against women, I knew that this was the perfect thing to publish as it was actually written by me. I still find it a little spooky that I wrote a 55 fiction about Domestic Violence just two days before the said day without knowing of it.
    Thank you for your compliments about my blogs. The reason I keep this blog diverse is because I firmly believe that each every individual is multifaceted (though sometimes teens tend to act otherwise)
    Bell Bajao is a very good campaign that sends out a lucid powerful example to the masses.

    @Seema- Yes, education & Awareness is very very important to stop the menace of domestic violence or for that matter any crime against women.
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  9. Love the 55 fiction!!! It's awesome (despite having an idea as to what was to come)! And I heard about the bell bajao campaign and thought it was a very smart move. There was a slightly different one here where a man goes to his next door neighbour who is abusing his partner and hands him a baseball bat with the slogan being: staying silent about DV is as good as lending a helping hand.

    Education, Education, Education --- that is the key! Hopefully the stats will change.
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  10. @Psych Babbler- Thank You.
    Yes education & awareness are the most important things ere.
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  11. your 55 fiction is too good. The point is made perfectly yet it is so hurting.
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  12. damm!! how did i not read this before!! This was brilliant... every guy who beats his wife up should read this... am sure it will put him to shame... very nice...

    cheers!
    Tavish
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  13. damm!! how did i not read this before!! This was brilliant... every guy who beats his wife up should read this... am sure it will put him to shame... very nice...

    cheers!
    Tavish
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